Paul P. Mealing

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Friday 10 July 2020

Not losing the plot, and even how to find it

As I’ve pointed out in previous posts, the most difficult part of writing for me is plotting. The characters come relatively easy, though there is always the danger that they can be too much alike. I’ve noticed from my own reading that some authors produce a limited range of characters, not unlike some actors. Whether I fall into that category is for others to judge. 

But my characters do vary in age and gender and include AI entities (like androids). Ideally, a character reveals more of themselves as the story unfolds and even changes or grows. One should not do this deliberately – it’s best to just let it happen – try not to interfere is the intention if not always the result.

I’ve also pointed out previously that whether to outline or not is a personal preference, and sometimes a contentious one. As I keep saying, you need to find what works for you, and for me it took trial and error.

In my last post on this topic, I compared plotting to planning a project, because that is what I did professionally. On a project you have milestones that become ‘goals’ and there is invariably a suite of often diverse activities required to come together at the right time. In effect, making sure everything aligns was what my job was all about.

When it comes to plotting, we have ‘plot points’, which are analogous to milestones but not really the same thing. And this is relevant to whether one ‘outlines’ or not. A very good example is given in the movie, Their Finest (excellent movie), which is a film within a film and has a screenwriter as the protagonist. The writers have a board where they pin up the plot points and then join them up with scenes, which is what they write.

On the other hand, a lot of highly successful writers will tell you that they never outline at all, and there is a good reason for that. Spontaneity is what all artists strive for – it’s the very essence of creativity. I’ve remarked myself, that the best motivation to write a specific scene is the same as the reader’s: to find out what happens next. As a writer, you know that if you are surprised then so will your readers be.

Logically, if you don’t have an outline, you axiomatically don’t know what happens next, and the spontaneity that you strive for, is all but guaranteed. So what do I do? I do something in between. I learned early on that I need a plot point to aim at, and whether I know what lies beyond that plot point is not essential.

I found a method that works for me, and any writer needs to find a method that works for them. I keep a notebook, where I’ll ‘sketch’ what-ifs, which I’ll often do when I don’t know what the next plot point is. But once I’ve found it, and I always recognise it when I see it, I know I can go back to my story-in-progress. But that particular plot point should be far enough in the future that I can extemporise, and other plot points will occur spontaneously in the interim.

Backstory is often an important part of plot development. J.K. Rowling created a very complex backstory that was only revealed in the last 2 books of her Harry Potter series. George Lucas created such an extensive backstory for Star Wars, he was able to make 3 prequels out of it.

So, whether you outline or not may be dependent on how much you already know about your characters before you start.

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